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Candle
Flame giving off
Heat, Light, comforting glow
Guiding light in the dark of night
A flame
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Water
Flowing freely
Fingers pass through slowly
Taking in the river water's
Deep soul
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Breathing
Taking it in
The wind dancing through hair
The breeze forever taking words
On air
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Green leaf
Floating down from
the newly planted tree
Seeing neverending beauty
The earth
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Author notes
I thought i'd be original and do it in 4 cinquains, and it is cool that it worked out to be the 20 lines:)
kayla*
Written January 12th, 2003
A contest entry
- Nature's elements are tremendous forces(Earth, Air, Fire and Water).Write a descriptive poem about o by Amunet Wolfbane.
100 points, ended January 13, 2003, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like this chain, Kayla, very nice. You should use it.
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oh WOW this is so very good in deed I love the way your word did flow just like the water in you poem. The only thing I can to this poem ASOLUTELY INCREDIBLE. thank you for shareing it
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wow great job of this, very beautiful and well done. good luck in the challenge, blessed be
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