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The Passage To Heav'n

As you walk through the mist of fog that
lies just below the mountain peak--follow
your heart and you will be guided through
to the next clearing and the next healing.

The road ahead is clear as the sunshine
reflects off the mountain peak--engulfing
you in love and warmth, and light. It is a
continual pattern that urges you on with
it's familiarity. The knowing ever present
that you will soon merge with your true self,
soul, heart and devinity that grows within
you.

You will then add with the All to bring the
love,warmth,and light to those who follow--
knowing those who follow will be cradled in
the warmth of God's arms.

 

In memory of my Uncle Nelson Brown

 

 

Author notes

During meditation in the summer of 2005, I was given this poem. I had not written poetry before. My uncle was dying and my son-in-law to be had just lost his Mother and I wanted something special to celebrate their lives. I entered the poem in a contest and won. In February of 2006 I was looking at poety sites and found Allpoetry and joined and was given more poems during meditation.

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  • tawk gold member
    April 24

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    Beautiful and heartfelt I am so glad that you found ap. Thanks for sharing your amazing talents. Good luck in the contest and have a blessed weekend, hugs Theresa


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    April 4

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    Truely lovely!

    TO go home again - through that familiar passage that all of us recognize to the Pleiades - where the Divine dwells; and our Home withing. Beautiful and enlightened as well! thank you for your entry!


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Wow, this is very beautiful. This uplifted my spirit, and I felt like these words were meant just for me... Even tho I see it was written for you uncle, I am sorry for your loss Thank you for sharing this with me


  • dreamdragon6484
    May 25, 2008

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    Beautiful

    A warm and description of passing.
    He must have been a very special person as is all who assend. blessed be and good luck

  • imahealer
    May 23, 2008

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    You certainly wore your heart on your sleeve hear. This is a dear tribute to your Uncle Nelson Brown. I can tell by your words that you believe that he will be in a better place, and that you will celebrate his life, as you did in this verse. WE all die, so a celebration and fond memories keep us in touch. An angel on your shoulder. Thank you so much for your beautiful entry.

    Shana


  • movedon
    May 22, 2008
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    So sorry for your loss. Thanks for entering and good luck

    Mylee


  • CountryCousin
    May 10, 2008

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    Beautiful.

    What a wonderful way to rember your uncle. I wish that all could see it this way. Dying is a passage and when it is a horrible disease one has to embrace the good. Remembering is the honor.


  • Three Doves
    February 21, 2008
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    A BEAUTIFUL WRITE

    I LOVE THE PATH OF YOUR POEM ALONG THE MOUNTAIN PEAK.
    TRULY ABOVE THE FOG WITH CLARITY IN YOUR VISION. THANK YOU FOR PRESENTING YOUR HEART WITH A FLAWLESS POEM OF LIGHT. CHECK SPELLING IN YOUR TITLE. PLEASE PLACE YOUR USERNAME AND FAMILY PREFERENCE IN YOUR RESPONSE TO MY COMMENT.

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