Souls cloaked in stardust
dance upon the sun's blue moon.
Eternity births another age,
as life begins another tune.
Twinkling with purpose
Curiousity beaming
Drunk on wonder
Uneneded dreaming
This is where
all journeys begin.
Traveling far,
to seek what's within.
Questions asked in time,
answered by the living song,
As souls wrapped in stardust
attempt to play along.
Author notes
Musings. Let me know what you think.
Written February 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- 10 options for the creative poet (3) by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended June 17, 2008, 34 entries
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great
realy interesting i like it alot
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This is beautiful. The imagery of this piece is riveting. I feel like I could close my eyes and picture this beautiful picture you have created.
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this is really creative!! thanks for the entry!
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A very deep thought provoking piece ... may just be musings but its something we all have thought of at some time or another. I loved the rhyme scheme to this and the content is quality
Loved it 
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Awesome write. I love the words you have choosen for this poem.
~Kari -
it's good....
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fantastic
j'aime, c'est trés bien! (i like, it's very good) a lot of great metaphors and i like the subtle rhyming. the description is amazing - my favourite line is the "souls wrapped in stardust" i think that's excellent!
great write, well done!
* ~ Laura ~ *
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