With a quick flick of the towel
Against her wet ass cheeks
She turned to find him standing there
His hand commanding her down
And she dropped to her knees
Hands clasped behind her back
He walked slowly around her body
As if he was inspecting her
Her eyes locked in a gaze
Afraid to look anywhere else but forward
Was it a fear of what was to come?
Or what he would do if he caught her
looking around?
He circled her wet, glistening body once
again
Stopping behind her
There was that feeling
The cold steel upon her wrists
That confirming click
Then all went dark.....
As he pulled her to a stand
He whispered in her ear,
"Don't worry doll, I won't hurt you...
Much!"
His grin wicked, in a seductive way
The air, suddenly cold against her skin
Causing her nipples to peak
She quickly realized they were outside
The thought of pleasing him outdoors,
Under the moon and stars...
A tremendous turn on
And she can feel herself getting wet again
Her insides trembling at the thought
As they came to the two-railed fence
He stopped, replacing her cuffs
With full shackles
Her ripe body bent over the rails
Her already wet sex exposed
He was so hard....
She felt the brushed leather
Tickle her inner thigh
Just before the crop
Struck her ass playfully
A small pink welt
A little pain
A whole lot of pleasure
Her legs quivering
The wetness trickling down
And he was in her
Deep
Hard
Thrusting with force
And once again
She sought to please her Master...
(to be continued)
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Written February 9th, 2006
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This had good imagery. Another poem that was very nicely written.
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Wonderfully done! I enjoy all your series in this line. The imagery is so very good, I feel like I am watching this on a movie rather than reading about it. You make it very lively and kicking and tasteful too. I hope you are a published erotica poetess or planning on becoming one. You would do so well, in my humble opinion. All the best,
Charishma
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its so tantalizing. like everyone has been saying, I love the outdoor setting. I'm so truned on now. must... read... part...6...
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Form??? Well, I just kind of write whatever comes to me, sometimes some form of rhyme, sometimes whatever. I guess it's more free form than anything seeing as it is taking on a story-like quality.
Thanks for the comments, much appreciated
Autumn -
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love your writing and how you have put this scene outdoors! I guess I have come in one continuing part and I need to read the rest. What form is this done or is it free form? -
great addition
great job storm theres going to be like no ending to this collection you should turn it into an erotica book
and publish it i know quite a few people that would buy it
well byes for now
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another nice addition to the collection. keep up the great work. I enjoyed this one from start to finish.
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