On earth as in Heavn, we are each a part of a group.
On earth as in Heavn, we each chose our group.
On earth as in Heavn, this choice is directd by our goal.
On earth as in Heavn, the goal is to learn.
On earth as in Heavn, Love is the greatest lesson learned.
On earth as in Heavn, each lesson in Love acends us higher.
On earth as in Heavn, each ascension brings us closer to bliss.
On earth as in Heavn, each vision of bliss brings us closer to the Light.
On earth as in Heavn, we are the Light.
Author notes
Written February 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- ATTN: Spiritual SOULS*****SPLENDOR....Our Creator says we are his splendor! DEFINE YOUR SPLENDOR...... by ears2hearyou.
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Very beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. Nicely done.
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thank you for entering first of all. i believe that this was religiously inspired. im not to big of a fan of religious poems. however, i should have specified that in the rules. anyway, putting that aside, i can see how you view the world. 'we are hear to learn" as you put it. im not sure if i agree with that, however, this is not for my oppinions but yours. best of luck and good write.
~MRH~ -
This is so full of support and strength ... thank you for your kind and wonderful words ... and thank you so much for your entry ... good luck in the contest ... i am sure she will adore it
Chantelle -
This is such a beautiful and uplifting spiritual piece. It made me feel good just reading it. Thanks so much for posting in my contest.
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This really touched my heart....
and comforted it too...the splendor we find in
the great lessons of life we learn...each vision of
bliss that brings us closer to the light, because
on Earth as in Heaven we are the light.
This is a splendor of a poem!
Thankyou, this helped me very much on my journey to
discover what is splendor!
ears/Seattle
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A beautiful poem! I praise you for taking on such an intersting view. May God's face grace you today.
Spreading love,
Miley -
You've captured quite a beautiful message within your words here, though I'm not that sure about the repetition you have in every other line... though that's only a matter of personal taste
thank you for sharing this one
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You have a very nice message here in these few lines...something that should be spread around and shared with joy...thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts...keep writing and welcome to allpoetry
~Kristy -
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Thank you
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