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Raf's Party

i dont know how to tell you what i feel i need to say
you know at Raf's party the other day?
how could you let it go that far and then just say the end?
i just wish the broken soul could easily be mend
im not saying its all your fault, it was some mine too
but i thought you'd make it different, the way i wanted you to do
i cant change your choice even though it'd be nice
because now when im around you i feel like im on thin ice
one wrong move and ive ruined it all
one wrong move and i'll stumble and fall
making a fool of myself and unable to change a thing
and im feeling all this because of one STUPID fling
im glad it happened but i wouldnt do it again
because after all, you said were "close friends"
but i only want to change one part
you know what i mean, the part where you broke my heart

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damn you Kevin!!
Written November 20th, 2005

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  • Jocilynn Destroyed
    November 8, 2007
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    Kevin who? ILY I will miss you...beautiful poem....keep writing its awesome!