A Brat Reformed
The water bombs are hidden
The pouncing is all through
This quiet, graceful, gentle girl
Is this the brat W/we knew?
It’s hard for U/us to recognise
And O/our thoughts to reconcile
The former brattish one W/we knew
In this one who’s so docile.
To watch her waiting silently
Beside that empty chair
O/one hardly dares to blink T/their eyes
Lest she vanish in thin air.
What has happened to the brat W/we knew?
A miracle from above?
A miracle more commonplace -
The miracle of love.
For now she see the meanings
Of what He’s tried to say
The one who was the brattish heart
Has chased the brat away.
So kneeling by His empty seat
She waits on His demand
Her surrender a reality
Her heart His to command.
Serving Him eternally,
(MD) rose anne (ws)
© 13 June 2005
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Written June 13th, 2005
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Wow this is stunning! I love the flow and the sentiments expressed in this poem. I am the ultimate brat and as a Dominant switch ( only switch to one person) I get away with it, My love and my Mistress allows me the freedom to express my brat, but there are times when even my brat does begin to behave! The love and submission that you show for Y/your Master is extraordinary …Well done!
~Dini~
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oh this is just so well written, and to know the pride that you had transforming into this elegent graceful flower. i commend you. good luck and thank you ever so kindly.. lee
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Obediently Freeing
This really enlighened me and brought much thought. I ponder now if this could be the real issue with me yet I wouldn't know how to dispel the brat in me. This brat is self-willed and strong because she's been abused her entire life by men. She doesn't trust any male and relenting hurts her more. To have the kind of master you have requires much from one man and if a man has been a sub could he learn to lead and teach. I truly long to be broken in love, beyond the brokeness that was left in me. I should know this type of love so easily it comes from Christ above being dom and sub is what he ordained. How does two mixed up brats learn to reverse the role............sigh. Beautiful, beautiful poem!! -
Beautifully Penned!
This is a very beautiful work with such a great flow to it. i love how you used the caps letter on this piece. The content just held me there until the end and i cannot wait to be in that position you once were. Thank you for sharing your work with me and for the wonderful gift of your pen. Blessed be, Nena
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