Two Hearts
To you on this Valentine’s day dear
When I declare my love for you
Openly before all of our friends.
How I’ve longed for this day to come;
Each rose represents the depths I feel
About you, how we’ll spend our life
Realizing our dream of being as one.
Together at last and free to speak out.
Sweetheart, Happy Valentine’s Day.
Author notes
Written February 8th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Valentine Acrostics [contest] by Samplette.
300 points, ended February 15, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks Sam, all fixed.
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I liked this...but I think like the first line, having day in it twice; kind of takes away from each other..Something like
"To you on this valentine's day dear" But that is just a personal opinion...and YOUR words are beautifully yours.
Thank you for entering the contest. Love your border.
Sam
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