I look out the window
Watch the world pass me by
i thought you know me
Now i wonder why
How could i be so dumb??
How could i be so blind??
Your just something
I left behind
When i didn't know the word "cry"
When i laughed
Such a distant memory of my past
i knew it would never last
Yea i thought "HAPPINESS" knew me
What a joke!
Happiness is a lie
Somebody wrote
~Yea I thought happy i was happy... wateva~
Author notes
i mean i scream until i have no more air in my lounges, but itz like nobody even cares to hear
Written February 7th, 2006
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Emotional
You're are good yourself. You felt yourself graduate in the way you deliver your writing now. I understand that progression. I recently went through a "change" as well and it's feel's (this is my third time)...and you'll continue to reach different levels and heights in your writing as long as you pursue it. Congratulations and this is a great piece of work
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Beautiful poem sweetie!
I really loved the use of language!
You're writing is really maturing!
Good job Nerny!
Poetic Demise aka. Ann -
Beautiful, Nerny. I'm glad you could let out your feelings on this matter so freely. It helps...sometimes.
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wow.... this is a great job.... i mean its sad and dark, but i mean happiness havent left you, its not a lie, and i mean you jsut have to look for it if you really want it.... thats all too it. great job on this. i really liked it andgreat background
~~KIM~~
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