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Desert Storm (acrostic)

Western storms of desert torrent*
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Incinerated dry sun burnt debris*
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Natures way of cleansing forest*
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Deluge in dried dusty proclivity*
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~Suseann~

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Written February 7th, 2006

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  • suseann
    February 12, 2006
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    Rolling tall grass prairie,wheat fields too.Think we still hold the title of "bread basket of the world".Isn't Iowa in tornado ally also?I thought it was.~~Suseann


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    February 12, 2006
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    that was really good suseann.. i actually thought it was an acrostic to "Desert Storm" not "wind" lol
    Strong vocabulary there too
    I enjoyed reading it very much.. keep on writing dear and good luck with the contest

    Nooni

  • ecrivain01
    February 12, 2006
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    That's what Kansas is famous for anyway, isn't it? I mean wind and dust, and tornados. Interesting poem. The background is really nice too.


  • Cat
    February 9, 2006
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    Although i am not a fan of acrostic poetry for many reasons- this one is rather nice and the presentation is lovely. I'm very happy to have this beautifully presented poem in our contest. Thank you.

    m


  • rebeka
    February 9, 2006
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    now i am thirsty,

    i love the theme of dry and orange dust i get from these few words...and it does make me think of a dry dry wind blowing across time. it is a thought provoking write, and i enjoyed reading it. best of luck in all.

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