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Craving You

I crave to trace the outline of your lips.

Run my fingers through your hair.

To kiss your nipples.

Drink from your belly button.

 

I crave for your lips to meet mine.

The butterfly kisses upon my neck.

Your tongue gliding down my stomach.

You nibbling on my ears.

 

I crave kissing your inner thighs.

Blowing into your rectum.

Massaging your balls with my mouth.

Taking long strokes upon your penis.

 

I crave your tongue inside me.

Your gentle hands lifting my ass up.

The attention I get from you.

You bathing me.

 

I crave you being submissive to me.

Us becoming one.

I so crave you and I being together.

 

Yvonne J. Griffin

2/07/06

 

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Written February 7th, 2006

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  • q-pid
    February 19, 2006
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    Very hot and intimate. I can really feel a sense of passion and love in this piece. I loved it.

  • rainbow tears
    February 8, 2006
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    nice poem i was feelin everythig but da "balls" .... naw i dont fuck wit dat but good write

  • pozo
    February 8, 2006
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    Intimate and hot. I liked your use of assonance here, this seemed quite romantic with its descriptions too Keep writing this was a unique piece
    Thanks for your comments
    All the best
    Pozo

  • Cwm
    February 7, 2006
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    Being togetther having hot steamy sex.... yeah, I bet you do crave being with him! No seriously i'm happy for you... I hope this is true and not a dream that you found someone... so you can do uh... all type of activities with..


  • angelica silver member
    February 7, 2006
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    Being together with the one you love is very important, you have penned your thoughts wonderfully Yvonne.(now I need to have a shower) Loved it Yvonne, very steamy.
    Love Joan

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