I've learned my lesson!
The brief acknowledgement I pay
Is not enough, you claim.
I'm sorry my lord,
I had no idea
That when I placed blame-
I was so overwhelmingly right:
You came to me tonight
Through a broken picture frame.
Your legions of rodents
Surrounding your feet
To teach me me a lesson, that was your aim.
Well, my lord, you have succeeded
Please let me go, my arrogance receded.
Please sir, just let me out of your game!
I saw possession of the worst kind:
You made my brother dive to his death
You took a girl and didn't even grant her boy the same
Master, sir, don't do this to me
I need to rest, just let me be!
I'm sorry for the disrespect, I am in shame.
~*~What's that? A whisper?~*~
~*~I can't here you lord~*~
~*~Just, I promise, I'm sorry~*~
Author notes
okay, a couple of hours I wrote a poem about my view of the lord of nightmares, and then around three, I went to sleep. Now it's shortly after five and the sleep I got was plagued with nightmares. No Joke. I can't sleep now, due to the fear from these dreams. I apologize, Lord Fear Sir, I didn't really mean to offend. You made a believer out of me! Oh and Sir, I only put this in fantasy for continuity's sake. I don't mean to disrespect.
Written February 7th, 2006
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Good job! this is great piece Thanks for your comment on mean!
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very emotional here and things do get hard and tend to blame god for them, thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry!
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Offending the Gods can have that effect, lol. But I am sure you'll have a good night's rest tonight. The poem itself is very good and not too groveling. It's just an apology and an acknowledgement that you were wrong.
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wow! i know what u mean, it's really scary...that dream made you so upset, I hope tonight will be ok!!!
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Wow, this is intense. I like it alot, and yeah, that;s one heck of a drweam , isn't it?
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Good job! You can rhyme quite well.
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did you read the other one? i seriously think i offended someone. my mind is much clearer now, hours after i woke up in fear, but it really did scare me shitless... so i grovel. hopefully it works. we'll see tonight i guess
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disturbing but great
this is great piece
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another great piece. I can see that the dream you had must have really disturbed you as you seem to have written this pieceout of depiration! again, good work! best of luck, princess xx
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