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Master's Pleasure- Part 4- The Wet Ride

He takes her into the shower
Binds her to the bars
Legs spread from one wall. to the other

As the steamy water pelts her skin
She feels his hands upon her
Slowly lathering the soap on her body
Every inch, from top to bottom

His fingers softly gliding over her
Her body tingling from his touch
She pushes back against him
The curve of her ass teasing him
Almost begging him

For his pleasure has become hers

His rise presses to her body
Touching her playfully...
Teasingly
Until he is ready to give in
His primal lust controlling him
As he plunges deep into her

And she cries out...

He reaches around
Caressing her breasts
Pinching at her nipples
Causing her to thrust back against him
Stroking him
Riding him

Dual moans reveal their hot passion
Bodies twisting together in fluid motion
As her insides begin to quiver
An explosion of raw lust nears
He lifts her body
Pulling her hard onto his throbbing

muscle

She tightens around him
And together they crest
His seed bursting through her petals
Her pulsing waves milking him

He lowers her to the floor,
Releasing her once again
She turns to him, smiling
Kisses his lips
Soap in hand, for Master's pleasure
Continues their shower...

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Written February 7th, 2006

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  • Swtpoetryman
    August 23, 2007

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    Another sensual piece that i had to play with!

    This is quite a stimulating series - to say the least. It sounds like this MASTER has his pet well trained - or is it the other way around (LOL!) for this pet is getting her fair share of pleasure, too!
    Peace & love!
    Earl.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you for the comments to the series. They are much appreciated. Glad you are enjoying

    Storm

  • youngfirefly
    April 18, 2006
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    Nicely written

    WOW! I think that I like this one the best out of all 4 so far. They just keep getting better and better. Again very good imagery and this was a very intense poem. Keep them coming!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    April 2, 2006
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    I will sum up all my thanks in one spot so as to not over crowd your inbox...lol.

    Thank you for reading and commenting, it is most appreciated. Glad you have enjoyed, and as you can see there is an entire manuscript here. And they just keep cummin..oops coming. Perhaps one day I will get these all together and make a small book out of them.

    Autumn

  • KnightRhymer
    April 2, 2006
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    Alrighty then. The love they have each other is so very vlear and vivid. That is the true foundation of a sucessful master/submissive team. The passions just feed off of that. So vey well done, my dear Goddess. I shall take a break now as works calls. I shall return soon.
  • Lady writes in Blue
    March 27, 2006
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    These are just amazing! You write such wonderful erotica, conjouring up real imagery without the need for vulgariy, there is a real sensuality in here, fantastic piece LWiB x

  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    February 20, 2006
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    WOW, this is so very nice! THe imagry is just out of this world! AWESOME, once again!

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 12, 2006
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    Wow! I like this one the best of all the 5 you have written in this series so far. Sex in the shower is a big bright Y E S in my book The imagery of this is awesome. I enjoyed this alot.

    Keep up the steam in your pen,
    Charishma

  • my-masquerade
    February 11, 2006
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    as always, a pleasure, literally. I'm off to read the next. wow, you just churn them out. sweetness

  • xxprophet gold member
    February 7, 2006
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    LINGUISTICALLY SATISFYING

    ARE THESE MEMORIES, MEMOIRS OR FANTASY. CAUSE IF IT'S THE 1ST, I JUST WANT TO SAY " LUCKY LUCKY MAN JESUS LUCKY LUCKY MAN. HE NEVER HAS A NEED TO WIN THE LOTTERY BECAUSE HE HAS WON YOU AND
    THAT'S ALL THE HAPPINESS A MAN COULD EVER HOPE FOR LET ALONE STAND. BUT IF IT'S THE LATTER. HEY I WOULD JUST LIKE TO ASK IF YOU ARE TAKING APPLICATIUONS FOR A VACANTCY (DON'T THINK I SPELLED THAT RIGHT BUT YOU GET THE DRIFT). SMILE SPEECHLESS
    PIECE 'ONCE AGAIN' ANOTHER ONE HIT OUT THE "BALLS" PARK LOL
    EXCELLENT LADY ABSOLUTELY EXCELLENT. NOW I AM GOING TO HAVE A CIGARETTE, A CHILLED TEQUILA AND ANOTHER CIGARETTE AND THEN A COLD SHOWER. OMG..OOODENESSS WHOA

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    February 7, 2006
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    this was great and I enjoyed it alot, keep up the great work.
  • theomorphic
    February 7, 2006
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    by the way, where's parts 1-3
  • theomorphic
    February 7, 2006
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    wow, very erotic, very visual with your words, or do i just have a very vivid imagination,? either way, i liked it
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