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Love and all that mushy stuff.

When you say my name,it sounds so smooth the way the wind of your breath escapes through your lips.
when you hold me close to your body,your hands on my hips.
When we slow dance to the music that plays in our head.
When you sing to me,I feel so alive when I once felt so dead.
When you smile and look into my eyes,then we kiss.
when I onced rolled my eyes at people who talked like this.
I cant remember.
My love to you I give my all I surrender.
When we fight,it makes it all more real.
When we say were sorry,and talk about how we feel.
That is love thats the true deal.
We got it babe,you and me.
Did you ever think this could be?
I didn't until that afternoon,as we walked along the crazy streets of N.Y.C.
You said you had plans for us.
So we packed our bags and took that bus.

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Written February 6th, 2006

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