you try to intimidate me
with your sarcasm
and hypocrisy
your lies and your
false friendship
Who do you think
you are?
That can even pretend
to act as the Queen of
The vast universe
when you are so much less
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
What is wrong with you?
Why were you brought up
to believe that the more
you insult a human being
the more that it would like you?
Haven’t you heard the old
passage
“You catch more bees with
honey than with vinegar”?
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
Well, your are not
just vinegar
you are pure acrid
putrid
bitter
acid
You disgust me,
You large hypocrite
do you reckon I’m
ignorant to Your
numerous insults,
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
Do you think I’m made of
metal,
I’m not like you, cold plastic,
I’m made out of flesh , blood,
Bones, and various organs,
in other words I have true feelings,
I’m not like you
crying because you feel
jealous of a girl
because this guys likes
her, a boy
you don’t even fancy,
I’m not like you
sobbing because I think
that nobody likes me,
that I’m ugly,
and then acting like
everyone else is below me
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
Your are the worst of friend
anyone could as for!
You are a
liar
hypocrite
jealous bacteria
untrustworthy
air head
so filled with your self
large ego organism
ungrateful
rude
brutal
grotesque
traitor
a wanna be
With friend like you
who wants enemies!!!
Don’t think I’m impervious
to your insults,
I know what you say about me,
I’ve been waiting for
the right moment that’s all…
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
Your wasting you time,
trying to vex me with
your lame insults.
Truly… I inquire
“Do you really think
I’m a prostitute?”
As you vastly declare
with more of a rude language,
especially what vexes me the most
is that you are such a PHONEY
TRY to be yourself for once!
Just because you don’t like yourself
doesn’t mean
you can go on insult others
to make yourself feel any better!
Your pure evil…
I regret I noticed only to late…
Since first grade… how could you?
Oh how I despise you!
How do I wish
that you got a trip to Antarctica
and that you stayed there
until all your evil ways froze up!
Tomorrow, you’ll see me coming
then you will run,
Oh you will run as fast
as you can
but still,
it wouldn’t be fast enough,
because all of the wickedness
you have caused
will pull you behind…
right into my claws
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow
I’m anxious for tomorrow!
Author notes
Written February 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Torture me by fire angel.
300 points, ended March 27, 2006, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm a Bitch, I'm a Lover? by Poetic Obscenity.
1000 points, ended July 6, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Raw Emotion by x meerz.
500 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Betrayal by Baisi.
1200 points, ended November 23, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Angry?!! Show me just how angry you are... by starving-to-survive.
1250 points, ended January 25, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very interesting. I can really feel you anger pain and you let down and disappointment in your so called friend. Gread write hun, keep it up and thanks for entering my contest
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This is full of anger and hate and betrayal, and I can relate. I know someone who's treated me like that for as long as I can remember. We're cousins. I love this. Best of luck in future contests.
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Thank you so much for your comment and the silver! I'm glad you liked it, I'm very honored. I'm sorry about your cousins. Most of the time they do change, after a year she changed and realized her mistakes. Thank you so much!
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loved it<3
thanks for entering adn good luck -
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I greatly appreciate it! Thanks =)
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hahaha! thanks so much I very grateful. Thanks for your comment! Senior! I know one more year and then bliss...
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DAMN
That's very bitchy, very angry and yet it's horrible that so many people can relate to this. You've got an amazing write here that perfectly fits the contest and it flows wonderfully. There were a few points of forced rhyming. Though it really didn't take away from the piece at all.
I truly enjoyed this particular part.
"I’m not like you
sobbing because I think
that nobody likes me,
that I’m ugly,
and then acting like
everyone else is below me"
I've dealt with it on many occasions, so i find myself being very drawn to it.
Thank you and good luck.
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Thank so much for your comment and your applause! Yes I was feeling bitchy I swear i could of made the earth move with the anger and disappointment I felt. You see my best friend since sixth grade began to spread rumors about me and insult me behind my back. But here is the even more bitchy fact. The friend who told me this a very good friend of mine another best friend, well that was an even worse bitch. She lied to me because she was jealous had come to our school and she despised her friendship. So what she tried to do was to make me fight with everyone so that she'll be my only friend. God I hate that bºtch.
Sorry for the awkward rhyming, I wasn't really processing that night. -
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You're welcome
Wow. I'm so sorry that it happened to you. Though, i'm glad you weren't too heated that you couldn't see the real truth. I wouldn't like her much either. I feel bad for her, because she is going to have a very difficult time in life. Though, it's still horrible what she did.
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Sorry I wrote, Sixth grade I meant first hehe. Yeah things are better know, I mean the girl that lied to me and made the whole mess well she left that year. That happen on my freshmen year, now its my last year of highschool, and I heal quickly.
Thanks for your comment, I am very grateful
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Haha. That's wonderful. I would have left too if i did something that bitchy. Wow, go you, Ms. Senior!! =]
No problem. I LOVE reading poetry. Good poetry that is..and that's what i've found here.^^
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nice poem! alot of emotion and shows just how your thinking! i like the style the poem written slighty unshal which is always good makes the poem stand out well done and good luck in the contest
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Oh man, this is another excellent poem that is drowning with complete emotions. You were able to portray your feelings so well, you put this poem together well. The title makes you wonder "What is she anxious for??" Man.. I related it to my life too! lol ALthough the subject of the poem and my situation differes. Anyway, this was excellent and I really loved it. I hope you ended up winning this contest! You definately deserve some sort of prize!
Take Care,
x PatientGrace x
Jasmine
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hehehe thank you for your comment!
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This is a very deep poem with alot of emotions, this wriiten very well, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
rain75
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