A pool of darkness concieves my heart,
as i watch you follow that self-centered tart.
Beneath the surface my feelings run cold.
Cause the words of my heart will remain untold.
Having you means only a taste.
While she has it all and does nothing but waste.
She pulls and tugs like a chain on your soul.
While deep in her chest is nothing but coal.
All i can do is give you my hand.
You dont want my heart, but i understand.
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Written February 6th, 2006
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Hey girl! I love this piece. Seriously. It says what we all know and want to say you speak the odvious but twist it so its something our hearts can only long to speak. I love it! I hope you're doing well. I'm doing great. I hope to hear from you!
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wow i like this. it's touching. It's very sad. I can tell how you feel by reading this. very emotional. great write.
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very touching and very realistic about relationships. You can't win all of 'em. i can totally relate to this when seeing your loved one with another.. and u truly do understand and tell them u understand ... but makes it harder is if that person doesnt care if u understand or not. owch. great write, hope you find love!
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You can read anyones mind it seems. Good job hun. Take care.
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Nice job Kallie
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Oo. This is really good.
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O.O Nice...Wonderful..Great job.
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