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A Long Night.......

A Long Night


Awake all night, mind in turmoil, alone
Thoughts rampage, taking routes of their own
Possibilities, unrealities, wishful thinking
Rain lashing, black window, mixed feelings

Isolation, listlessness, fatigue takes root
Body twitching, back aching, volume mute
Vivid images, so real, can almost smell
Deep thinking, pointless, bottomless well

Selfish, immobile, dark thoughts arise
Bleak future, lost dreams, now sunrise
New dawn, new dreams, not found yet
Dank morning, damp spirit, goals not met

Ablutions, don smile, make toast and tea
False humour, light hearted, family
Scared, fear permeating, back of mind
Control, get grip, don’t lose this time

Staring, blankly, focusing, leafless trees
Grey skies, fine drizzle, stiff cold breeze
Past haunting, no smile, future daunting
Winter coming, fortitude, needing spring

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Written February 6th, 2006

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  • FirstScript
    March 1, 2006
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    Pills??? omg, wat pills? glad its in the past... and whrs the triptych?


  • cynic
    March 1, 2006
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    Ahhh yes...a long night indeed that was.......sat staring at my pills sat in a pile for hours.....still in the past....thanks for reading

    BTW....just tried a triptych....off the cuff as it were...LOL

  • FirstScript
    March 1, 2006
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    How did I miss this one before?? This is a lovely expression of a mind in utter turmoil.. amazing work... glad i read it


  • cynic
    February 6, 2006
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    Thank you FF07......greatly appreciated.....glad you enjoyed

  • franticfreak07
    February 6, 2006
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    good job this was a good write

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