Lord I don't know why
you do what you do
you are always there
even when I ignore you
i go my own way
and try and make it right
but in the end i drop my burden
and give up the fight
You are all i need
and I've realized that now
so please Lord, please save me
your the only one that knows how
Take me out of this place Lord
and put me where I fit
I'm always wanting
what I can't get
I was afraid Lord
but you gave me courage
and now I love what I do
all because I know you
you have plans for us all
and i wish i could see
all things that you have
in store for me
you make me love life God
so help me to help my friends
love their life too
i love them alot
and i know that you do too
Author notes
ok this is pretty bad - i was just getting thoughts on paper since i haven't written a poem in awhile - and it shows lol so yeah and the rhyming's off but hope you like it anyways!
Written February 6th, 2006
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This isn't bad, it's good. I really liked it. And it's something that I really needed to read. I am kinda stressed right now.
Anyway, great poem! -
Wow mon ami! This is wonderful. And it doesnt show that you havent written in a while. Well I know you havent written in a while because I usually catch all your works. Even if I forget to comment, I read them. This was beautiful though. I liked all you had to say. I especially like the lines:
you have plans for us all
and i wish i could see
all things that you have
in store for me
Dont we all? Well I know I do, but sometimes things are better kept a surprise right? Sometimes the surprise isnt always good but he never puts anything on us that we cant handle. When something bad comes along, and you know/think you dont deserve it, something 10 times better always follows or comes before it. Like with me and my boyfriend, before him JUST I'd gotten out of a bad break up/relationship. I was so depressed and unhappy as you've probably read in some of my earlier works. He has shown me real, true love, happiness, kindness. And all kinds of other things I've never possessed. With him, over these 5 months, this is the HAPPIEST I've EVER been. We're still going strong too. But like I said when Something good/bad comes along the opposite always follows. And the bad side is I lost my house...not like I cant find it or anything, Just that...Im homeless...kinda. My friends and my boyfriends family have taken us in. Be greatful for the good and dismiss the bad.
Yep I probably should have left that paragraph out...Besides Im sure you're tired of reading my comment by now. Lol sorry it dragged on, to rap this up I'll say Beautiful poem and it always gets better, even when it doesnt seem like it will... Love ya lots, I look forward to reading more of your works!!! Um it might take a while for me to read them or something because of the situation Im in but DONT STOP!!!
~Vamp
Edited on Feb 21, 10:55 p.m. because ''. -
It wasen't bad at all...I enjoyed it.
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