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Me And You

Doo Doo Doo Doo Doo Doo {sung in background}
When you wish
To never was a dish
It will come true
For me and you.
Doo Doo Doo Doo Doo Doo {still sung in background}

Do you ever clean your room?
Or sweep with a broom?
Do you ever want a break
And to stop moving the rake?

How could you go through?
It's just me and you!!!

Doo Doo Doo Doo Doo Doo {still sung in background}

Author notes

I wrote this for my mom after watching her do chores all day!!  She does so much for me and our home.  I love her.

Please remember I'm only seven when you comment.
Written February 6th, 2006

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    February 10, 2006
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    that was an awesome song.. very cute and very sweet..
    I bet your mum is really proud of you
    if you are a first grader and can do this!! I bet everyone must be amazed by your abilities..
    I hope to read more of your stuff soon.. it was a very enjoyable read!

    Keep on writing and keep up the excellent job!

    Nooni

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 7, 2006
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    This is sooooo cute. Great job.
    You write well for a kid your age. Keep up the good work.
    Brian


  • FlawedDestiny
    February 6, 2006
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    LOL Well, his writing is appreciated by some people because today he won Author Of the Month. And if that wasn't enough he also won Reader of the Month. He's only seven...I loved it. Of course, I am his mother.

  • Ar60
    February 6, 2006
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    Doo doo! Is what I think of it...Just kidding or am I...Just kidding again...Though I think it is not finished when it is...Would someone in the background sing...Done done done done done done...

  • FlawedDestiny
    February 6, 2006
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    I love ya big guy! You're too cute. Thanks for writing me this! I fear you are already far more talented than I ever could wish to be!
    Love
    ~Mom~


  • Blasphemous Girl
    February 6, 2006
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    Awwwwww your sooo cute! xXx

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