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Pookie Poo

i can imagine this
you're shoveling snow
and the wind blows
it disturbs some of the white
and gathers your smell.
i wonder if you  know the wind sent some of your smell home to me.

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Written February 5th, 2006

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  • LastingEmber
    February 8, 2006
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    not to you, but to me it was very exciting and worth writing about. that's why love poems suck. they're not exciting to the readers.

  • Queen Kong 1
    February 6, 2006
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    its not very exciting