Anger, pain, sadness
Depression, loneliness,
Torment, starvation,
Screaming, agony,
Suffering, emptiness
Engulfed in darkness
That is what it is like...
Hell on earth
My life everyday
Living... dying...
Dying daily
Barely Hoping
Life has lost its meaning
Going through the actions
Becoming apathetic to everything
Just wanting one last chance
To experience life... the meaning
Just wanting seven minutes of heaven
Seven minutes of heaven
Seven minutes of peace
Putting the soul at rest
Filling the vast void
Giving meaning to live
A reason to keep waking up
Seven minutes is all I ask for
Just a taste of true happiness
Motivation to keep on living
A hope filled life to live
Seven minutes of happiness
Seven minutes of pureness
Seven minutes of contentment
Seven minutes... of heaven....
Author notes
Option: 6D
Number of Lines: 30
"valentines day 14th of February"
First title in a contest that's actually inspired me... 
I could have made this into a really spiritual poem, but I decided not to... 
Thanks for reading!
Written February 6th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Depression, love, humour, personal, happy. Anthing goes by purplebubbles.
300 points, ended February 10, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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simply beautiful
this is an awesome write. i can relate to this poem a lot. great work. bravo
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great poem
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It's very beautifull tim..life can seem like a dark pit at times and u just wish u could disapear and go away.....and yeah...its like the devil keeps tapping on yourn shoulder, but yuove got to kick him in the shins, and that'll scare him away
7 mins of pure ehaven, im been in heaven for the alst two days!! m so happy
and yeh dnt wrry bout what hapend with mush we toked..
anyway
xx
mars
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AMAZING!! I wish I could applaud it a hundred times......the impact that each word had on me was amazing. This was DEFINATELY the best poem I have seen in the last few days. Well done!
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wow that is really good. I can imagine it only 7 min. of pure heaven. it sort of seems imaginable, you know like impossible, but it seems really sweet. I think that everyone feels like that some times. Well, thats at least how I felt today......but it really just brings back the pain and lonliness all over again. I didn't ever really think that others felt that way, but oh well, it was really beautifully written!
thanks!
~*Chelsea*~
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Aww!!!! I want that....wow that makes me the kind of sad..that's beautiful. The one that's not extremely sad, but that is knowledgable and wanting. Wanting that thing..ready to take hold of it, but not sad that they do not have it.
This is ...amazing. Actually the percentage of your poetry is amazing (I'm not saying all, because I haven't read all). Wow...*hugs* Beautiful in the way that it could never be, just beyond beauty...beyond all, but all you can think of is one word. Beautiful. The sadness surrounding it..is beautiful. I don't know how to explain it besides the way I did.
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lol i wonder why u didnt go into spiritual?! lol (one comment ...is 'pureness' really a word? i think its purity, dude)
lol love the poem... and u took half of my advice! lol mMm...seven minutes in heaven. just a taste of what is to come... a glimpse of what we have to look forward to...I only ask for that Lord...I'd take up your cross if i could only see...or would I? hmm... waiting just makes it seem all the more sweet at the end of the road 
love the hurt described...
'Going through the actions
Becoming apathetic to everything' really stuck out to me... *sighs* thats basically how this morning was... thkfully no more!
good'n mate!
mushy
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