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Clear and eye catching
cupped in a curvy green leaf
rippling as it drops
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Author notes
i hope you like this, i plan to enter another one or 2, thanx
kayla*
Written January 3rd, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Write the best haiku/senryu you can about any subject. World Haiku Assoc. rules apply in that you c by haikumonk.
187 points, ended February 6, 2003, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is very good, Awesome Actually :) Love ya keep writing!!
Kerry
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Thats pretty much all i can say as well its very cool! and I like the way u just gave it that all it needs is this and its just POWER
One Love, One Voice, One Pen
BLO -
I love the way you incorporate the shape of your poem into the meaning it has. Nice work.
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I agree with deedeemac! Very VERY good!
~!~ Kerri ~!~ -
beautiful beautiful BEAUTIFUL!! Thats all I can say hun :)
Good luck sweetie!!
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