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Scary Thoughts

What I have in my head,
Is enough to make me dread?
What I have to think of day after day.
Death is in my heart
And anger is in my head?
And the other way around maybe...
That’s for me to know
And you to never know.
It’s for me to feel and for you,
Not to have to deal.
It’s for my life only
But you shall suffer it seems.
Maybe someday soon
You’ll see what it means.

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Written when things weren't so great with my ex and not sure what was in my head or heart.
Written February 5th, 2006

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  • tranquility
    February 5, 2006
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    This is very interesting. I thought the flow was a little choppy but the thought put into totally covered it up. This poem has a lot to go for and I think it's very interesting.
    I'm glad you enjoyed my writing and it makes me feel loved knowing you took the time to comment on my writing. Thanks again!!