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.Demon Flower.

.Demon Flower.

Flowers glowing red feed softly to the sea
Hands dripping flesh into flowerpots- flee
The demon flower
Works its way from out of the ground
Searching for what water is found...

.Water thicker than Blood.

Amid the crowd, sits a tree of tears
Where the demon flower returns
To spread flower’s blood into
The worlds- tears…

.That we do Cry.

Into… the world that we behold…
With our hearts and fears…
Flaring bold…

.The demon flower… Foresees us.

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Written February 4th, 2006

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  • Em
    February 6, 2006
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    Loved it!!!!

    It's been a while. This one had a beautiful entanglement of words and each line was well written. I'm happy I stopped by to read!

    Tina

    (haha I almost signed with my myspace name!)


  • vampireblood
    February 6, 2006
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    Awesome write mark! the whole poem was pure brilliance....the imagery was amazing..good to see something from you again
    ~~~Sierra~~~

  • Liquid punk
    February 6, 2006
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    I was just thinking of something demonic & thought that a flower would make for an interesting work onto that & I just worked it all into what you see.. Yep.. cool that you *loved the flower bit* tho..


  • Lamia
    February 6, 2006
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    From what deprived depths did you pull this one? Don't answer that...I'll just accept that you're awesome and you should continue to dig in those depths. Love the flower bit by the by

  • Liquid punk
    February 5, 2006
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    Hey V ~ Thanx so much for the comment ~ I appreciate it as always ~ & ok I'll keep it up but you better as well ~ttyl~

  • Liquid punk
    February 5, 2006
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    Thank you! Yeah I'm pretty syked about you saying that, that the background fits my poem, cuz I was struggling somewhat on that. But yeah..love your comment!

    Edited on Feb 05, 3:08 p.m. because ''.


  • city light illusion
    February 5, 2006
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    "To spread flower’s blood into
    The worlds- tears…"
    ".Water thicker than Blood."
    "With our hearts and fears…
    Flaring bold…

    .The demon flower… Foresees us."

    guh!! there were so many amazing lines in this poem! it was really captivating. you never make the reader wish for a new poem. you never make their eyes want to wonder and leave your words. it is so amazing!!! keep up the great work

    -V-

  • Halocaust
    February 5, 2006
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    The background works well with this glorious poem.
    "Forsees" "Water thicker than blood" "Flaring bold"
    Amazing lines. I love this so much

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