I wish I were a teddy bear
passed from place to place
to see the look of happiness
upon a young one's face
I wish I were a teddy bear
To be held by young and old
and to hear so many secrets
that to many have never been told
I wish I were a teddy bear
a true and trusted friend
to hear so many loving words
and to help a heartache mend
I wish I were a teddy bear
full of love and care
to anyone who needs a hug
who know's I'm always there
Author notes
I hope you like this
Written January 1st, 2003
A contest entry
- I'd like to see a poem about teddy bears, 16 lines, it doesn't have to rhyme, it can humor or hope o by Sara Peterson.
100 points, ended January 9, 2003, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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aww Such a beautiful poem
Teddy bears are there till the end
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Good poem
A very good poem and you are a teddy bear if you choose. Many people would enjoy a hug from you!
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awwww put a smile on my face
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that is such a cute and adorable poem. TEDDIE BEARS ROCK!
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awwww this is so cute hart :o) u really deserved this win... well penned :o)
hugs,
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i really loved this. it was written so well. this sound like my stuffed animals especially the dolll i've had since the day i was born. teddy bears become best friends...always there when you need a hug...hehe. great job and congrats on winning!
CaSeY -
awww that's a sweet write! congrats on the win!
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:) Thx for entering my challenge, i'll announce the winnter in about a week or two, depends on how many people enter. i did like this, good job. :)
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