There's something about your eyes,
that's screaming out my name,
seeping into every inch of me.
Tearing down every wall,
I have ever built.
Calming every fear,
I have ever felt.
Perfection at its purest,
your touch, your hug, your kiss.
And I swear,
I've never known
a love like this.
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I love my baby. 
Written February 4th, 2006
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nice! i feel the same way about my-x-bf. ugh...i wish i had him back.
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hmmm... Who could it be.? Beautiful write boo. Keep it up.
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Awh.
I defently agree with Britt.
Y'all aren't two people I would imagine being together.
But you make a cute couple.
I love you girl.
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aww its so sweet! im so happy for you. its a great write! it flows really well and its all lovey dovey which i cant resist. great great great! and lemme say it again. great!
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awww thsi is sweet great job
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love it babe!.. i think yall make a cute couple..deff. not 2 people i could have seen together before..but i think thats wat makes yall so good for each other..that yall are different from wat yall usually date.. I think he's good for you.. im glad to see you happy now..i can see your smile through the words in your poem..luv ya lots..
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Well, I understand how you feel. Im terrified about how I feel for my baby. We are only 16 and Ive been hurt. So, its hard to let my guard down. But, I love him. I dont think age has anyhting to do with it, when your really in love. So, good luck with your hunni. I hope all works for you.
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awwww.!that was good!very good I'm going to applaud this poem.
c-ya! -
this poem is great i found my true love already i know im young but im scared to love to show him my love were not together but he says he loves me and he going to the navy in a couple mouths..i dunno my past is a lil hard for me..
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