Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

One day you will come back and it will be spring

One day you will come back and it will be spring –
the cold ground will crack and run with crocuses
brash yellow and shy purple drifting away
into the distance.

Your gift will be days of returning sunlight
new time of evening’s brave and blonde afterglow
a fresh savour in the wind of something green
and young and growing.

Oh sure there will be wind and rain to bother
and slanting sleet upon the high mountain side
but the promise will be there in leaf and bud
and shorter shadows.

It will be the day when the wish of your heart
comes true against all reasoned expectation
that deep knowledge that a time would come for us
to make right a wrong.

Until that day I’ll keep my thoughts of springtime
to myself and nurture that seed in my heart
for I’m afraid you do not want to listen
to the truth in words.

But the river runs beneath the icy crust
and winter is a hoary old fibber now
to hide the truth-flow of ever-warming love
that will conquer cold.

Oh yes you will come back and it will be spring –
I know this as I know the tides ebb and flow
and as the rush of warmth into the black earth
my spring will be you!


[c] 2005

Author notes

Written February 4th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10

  • Nickelspring gold member
    August 31

    Edit | Reply
    I love the use of the imagery of spring to unfold the hope of a returning love. It speaks to me of a sadness I know all too well.
    K


  • Androgyneric
    October 10, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This is gorgeously sad, yet I like it so much, thanks for sharing this with us.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      December 20, 2007
      Edit | Reply
      Sorry for the late reply, Spiral, and thank you for your appreciation.
      M


  • Amera gold member
    July 29, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I am held in awe reading your poetry. The liquid flow of the unrhymed verse is amazing. This has a bitter sweet image and the read is captivating.


    Love,
    Amera ♥

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    June 29, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    It was written to the love of my life shortly after we parted - yes, the optimism is wishful rather than certain, hence the sadness.

  • ea silver member
    June 29, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    this makes me so hopelessly sad somehow.

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 19, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Nevada, your appreciation is worth more than gold to me! Sappho is the nearest thing I have to an earthly idol. The gift she gave to me - this wonderful verse-form in which to express the secrets of my heart - is priceless.

  • Mercury Rising
    May 19, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    marvelous

    Mairi bheang, I hear Sappho applauding in the leaves as we speak. Your verse is so clean and impeccable, not to mention intense and lovely.

    Nevada


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    You are never lame - bless you for finding this neglected Sapphic of mine and choosing it.


  • Melodies
    May 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I am capturing this one for Poetry Planet and am posting it today! a lovely, sweet, and sad poem of yearning. I hope your lover is returning. Oh bah, I am so lame. But my best wishes to you on this day!

1 - 10 of 10