In control you were.
February 2, 2006 I will always cherish,
Over the stars our souls have soared,
Under the falling water our time has come,
Natural animal instincts have kicked in,
Determined to please a friend.
Assuredly the heart does not lie.
Dive into my ocean,
Run through my fields,
Ecstasy is what's left for you and me,
Allowing passion to take over,
Memories I have penned upon this paper.
Yvonne J. Griffin
2/03/06
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Written February 3rd, 2006
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AWWWW, I'm so happy for you Yvonne, may you have a lifetime of happiness. And CONGRATULATIONS on your 700th poem
Love Joan
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This just dawned on me.... This poem is my 700th poem...
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February 2nd 2006 sounds like it was a dream come true for you my friend, I'm happy for you if it's true (I hope)because you deserve happiness my sweet.and what the other's say! "You are a great poet"
Love Joan
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Powerful piece Keep writing, I liked this, it seemed quite personal
Good use of sibilance and imagery
Thanks for your comment
Glad you liked, and no I've not been spying
All the best
Pozo
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jasmine,
thank you soooooo much for the wonderful comment. I truly appreciate the words of encouragement...
Yvonne
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Hey there. I was just going through the newly added poems and I came upon this poem. The title really caught my attention. I thought it would be original and interesting, and let me tell you. This was a poem that was both of those, interesting and original, along with amazing. I loved reading it throughout the entire poem, the flow was perfect. It seemed to role off my tongue, and lately, not many poems could do that, at least, none that I've read. I want to applaud you on such an amazing and wonderful job on such a creative poem! Now, I know it's stupid to say, but keep on writing! It would be a shame for the world to lose a great poet such as yourself.
Take Care,
x patientgrace x
Jasmine
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