Flying through the air with grace
all the colors of the spring
on transparent wings.
Author notes
comment's appreciated. Just got into Haiku lately.
Written February 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- H...is for Haiku by DogFish.
600 points, ended December 13, 2008, 22 entries
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"all the colors of the spring; on transparent wings" this is beautiful
good luck
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And this one
Yes bring this an excellent example of Haiku. Beautifully written.
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I really love this, im not a fan of haiku's but this one's so well done, i love the imagery on it, fantastic piece
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i don't know what to say i love it.
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I really like the idea of "transparent wings" that was my favourite line of this write. I could picture the delicate butterfly, this is a good write. Well done.
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Very nice write. Beautiful description.
Well crafted and a much enjoyed read.
ShelleyA -
good
interesting write....creates vivid imagery..
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