Let me tell you a story
Story about this girl
Who did nothing wrong
But yet, she still dies
Would you like to know why?
Story of this little girl happened five years ago
When she was just only seven years old
Her stepfather, who she loved dearly and respected the most
Brought her a cheese cake and told her to wait for him while he paid this woman for the cheese cake
While she waited for her stepfather, a few boys came
Stole her cheese cake
But she did nothing,
All she did was cry
Her stepfather comes up to her
Asked where the cheese cake
She lie and tell him, she eat at all
But just when they were fixing to leave
These little boys come up and ask did she have more cheese cake
Her stepfather asks what is going on
All she did was cry
She left her stepfather no choice
Her stepfather loved her but at the sametime he was angry at her
Not because of the cheese cake
Because she did not trust him enought to tell him the truth
So, he walks off just to scare her
And to punish her for not trusting him
But that little girl did nothing
All she did was cry
Little boys saw her stepfahter walk off
They start to have an arguement and demand more cheese cake
They start to push that little girl
They start to pull her hair
But that little girl did nothing
All she did was cry
Then her stepfather walks down from the street
Holding the cheese cake on his back
Wanting to say sorry to this little girl
But he sees how these little boys treat her
He yelled "Leave her alone"
That yelling makes that little girl stop crying
That yelling makes these little boys stop everything they did
Some begin to run
While others just stop there, too scared to do anyhting
That little girl runs as fast as she could to her stepfather
Just when she can almost touch her stepfather's arm
A vase from the fourth story hits her head
But that time she did not cry
Because she saw her stepfather
All this time,
All the crying that she did is not becasue she's scare
It's because she did not see her stepfather
She was scared her stepfather would leave her
Like her real father did.
That was why she cried
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Written February 3rd, 2006
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heartwrenching
Powerful Poem. -
My god how you write things like that. But still bring tears in my eye. I love it
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*Chilled* Oh... my God. This is just amazing. FLows beautifully; incredible piece. Keep it up!!
~dramaqueen469~ -
woooooooow!that was amazing!I like the way you described everything and put it in a poem!it's awesome!thanks for your comment!
Keep Writing
Best Wishes
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aw that was awesome great job... i loved it... it was interesting and being that i was bored it was sumthing to do but it was really interesting good job lol...
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that is an amazing story.. it mad me cry!!!!
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This is so sad and for a minute I thought that it would end with
a soft note, but not in such a way. -
Awww this is so sad. Such a strong poem you written, Dreamer. I'm very proud of you. Each poem you write makes you a better poet. Beautiful job
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Bravo!
Oh, man, that is just about as bleak as bleak can be!! But this poem is wonderfully put together Dreamer. This is, by far, your best written poem. You have improved greatly, monumentally! Bravo! -
Very sad and innocent story
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wow this is very good great write dreamer
xxlorren
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This is so sad dreamer....anything to do with kids really tears me up!!! Amazing job on this.
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very powerful words
I like the way you put things together
great stuff!!!
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