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Sprint Music Soul

Time Resolves Keystroke Hope Song Heart Kempo Tempo Control

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Because people are nature, too.
Written February 3rd, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    February 3, 2006
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    I'm sorry the contest closed just before you had the chance to enter this one This one feels more as a Senryu, since you are talking about feelings within these lines
    Though I have the feeling this one didn't read that fluently it's as if there some punctuation too short, especially in the second line...
    There also one little rule about haiku, and that's never to use capitals just as information
    thank you though for writing this one and sending me the link

    Leander