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Chris

I hate you, I hate you
From the depths of my soul
I'll chop off your head
And away it will roll.

I'll cut off your fingers
Set flames to your toes
I'll draw back my fist
And splatter your nose.

I'll knock out your teeth
And blacken your eyes
I want to lead
To your demise.

I hate you, I hate you
For the life you have led
I hate you, I hate you
I wish you were dead.

Author notes

This one is for Christopher Sean Kelly of North Fort Myers, Florida. He has ruined my life time and time again, and continues to do so this very day.So, if anybody from All Poetry sees him on the street, please accidentally run him over. I will be forever in your debt.
Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • Patience15
    February 13, 2006
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    I love this poem.Absolutely awesome!!!I can totally relate to your feelings.Great Job.Emily


  • Methodic Breakdown
    February 3, 2006
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    Hahahahaha! Alicia! Now you're putting out hit orders on people? Geez! I know Chris put you through a lot, but hey! He gave you Celeste, right? So, you sort've have to give him just a smidge of credit. I'm not defending him by any means. This is a great poem, and it really brings out the best in you....obviously! <3 U

    ~Robert