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The Goddess



I am the bright glow that illuminates the blinds upon your bedroom window,
as it peeks through the cracks to caress your cheek with a warm gentle kiss.



I am the cool summer breeze that blows briskly through the air in the dead of night,
as you dream upon realms unbeknown to many.



I am the wetness of the ocean that swells from the moon's kiss,
being made to caress the golden shores of space and time.



I am the tree that is deeply rooted into the earth, strong and firm,
yet still swaying effortlessly within the passing winds.



I am the animal which hunts and is hunted,
using barbaric methods by men that know no self respect.



I am the stars that adorn the indigo sheet of night,
as you lay your weary head upon a feathery pillow to dream of sweet tomorrows.



I am the scent of a rose that travels upon a soft spring breeze,
as it blossoms into full bloom and it's beauty undeniable.



I am the sweet song, for all to hear,
that is sung within the nests hidden out of reach high above the earth's canvas.



I am the eagle that soars through the clouds spreading my wings of freedom,
as the mountain air dances through my feathers.



I am the grass that blankets the ground beneath your feet,
providing color and comfort in a world where simple beauty is overlooked.



I am the soul that is born and reborn, constantly growing,
learning and teaching more with each passing day.



I am the heart that which is broken,
yet still loves unconditionally with no regrets.



I am the mind that lives in peace

among the chaos all around the world.



I am the spirit that strives for balance
while offering guidance to those with no direction.



I am everywhere and in everything,

I am the Goddess.







 

Author notes

Not exactly sure where this piece came from. It just popped in my mind and I went with it.


I am a witch and proud!
I have been practicing near 20 years now.

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  • Sokarjo
    February 11, 2007

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    Beautiful; full of imagery and feeling. Thanks for this wonderful entry, and for making it so hard for me to judge! This is fantastic.

  • Sokarjo
    February 9, 2007

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    Beautiful!! Superb imagery! Better flow than I would expect from this form; fantastic! Each line just entranced me... Thanks for this magical entry in my contest... good luck!


  • BeyondTheSurface
    January 2, 2007

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    Great poem. Nice use of imginery thoughout it. I enjoyed reading this piece. Good work and good luck in my contest.


  • TLRufener
    October 26, 2006
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    Grogeous. Absolutely gorgeous. I love the imagery you put into this piece. The description of what the Goddess is is excellent and very thought provoking. Great work!


  • Dspiritsong gold member
    October 7, 2006
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    wondrous

    Wow, this in wonderful indeed. I too could feel the touch of the Goddess looking over my shoulder as I read this. Gaia is special to us all... love Dee


  • April 11, 2006
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    Love it!

    How wonderful, I could feel the Goddess' touch as I read this poem and was reminded of just how much she means to us all. Wonderful work and excellent style. Best of Luck and Blessed Be!
    Lord DragonWolfe aka David


  • Celticmoon
    April 6, 2006
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    I am pleased you enjoyed this piece, thank you much.
    It was a piece that just manifested itself to me one night out of nowhere.

  • Availea
    April 6, 2006
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    Wonderful write! You really showed people what the Goddess is! This piece has just blown me away and is absolutely amazing. Best of luck to you in my contest and thank you for entering.
    Blessed Be & Brightest Blessings

  • sigrun odinsdottir
    March 18, 2006
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    sublimely gorgeous

    This is an amazing poem. I enjoyed reading it very much, it blessed my heart and made me smile and remember how wonderful the Goddess is to me and to us all. Thank you for gracing my contest with such quality work, I appreciate it very much! Hugs and love, and best of luck in the contest, Sigrun


  • lil-purple-pixi
    February 14, 2006
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    that is truely a awe inspiringly beautiful poem, it does justice to her great magnificence. thank you.
    -amyz

  • melonie74
    February 14, 2006
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    Beautiful

    This is a awesome poem.Good imagery.Nice flow to the poem.
    Nice picture.I think we all have that in us.


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    Aweinspiring and beautiful in it's truthful simplicity. You have really created a reverence in this poem Sis. Excellent flow and imagery and the pic fits too. Hugs and love, Syl


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    AWESOME WORK!!!!! ENJOYED IT!!!!!

    I am the reviewer poetess, that is going to tell you just how very beautifullly you have put this together! A very unique and original write. I have enjoyed reading this,
    thank you or sharing,
    AngelicMistress

  • AngelicMistress gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    AWESOME WORK!!!!! ENJOYED IT!!!!!

    I am the reviewer poetess, that is going to tell you just how very beautifullly you have put this together! A very unique and original write. I have enjoyed reading this,
    thank youf or sharing,
    AngelicMistress


  • BattleOfBlood
    February 14, 2006
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    Beautiful! What a tribute to the Great Goddess, its nice to see poetry like this. Keep on writing.
    Blessed be,
    LeFay


  • josh-13
    February 5, 2006
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    This was good, I do believe way different, but ya your flow was awesome, and the style was good, just kind of reading this brought back memorys of what I've been trying to get away from. awesoem job on writing this piece


  • peaceandpenguins
    February 5, 2006
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    i love the picture


  • ---FrumanEsque---
    February 5, 2006
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    Good ol' lies never hurt a flee!

    LIAR, no your not!!! But good write...


  • robert bolin
    February 4, 2006
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    If one person alone could bring to life a rainbow and let it shield the world from harm then they would realise that poetry in every form and beauty is what god has gifted you with a rainbow of passion and brilliance to last forever more...


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 3, 2006
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    Most beautifully written, my dear sister! Awesome writing from your pen today! Thank you for sharing and I hope your day is filled with lotsa love and smiles! Sandy

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