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Never Giving Up

Stab My Heart, Like You Stabbed My Back
Let The Blood Drip Down, Let Me Sink Into The Darkness
Bury Me Six Feet Under, Bury Your Conscience So You Don't Feel The Guilt.
Hurt Me Like You Always Wanted, Kill Me Like You've Always Erged.
Destroy My Body, Heart, and Soul. But Know,
I Will Rise Again.

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i put this as a header on my website...it started out to be a poem...but i left it at school and just tried to remember how it went...ill probably put the actual poem on here later...but this is just a lil quote or sneak preview of the poem.
Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • dreamersalwayslive
    January 8, 2008

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    Pretty good.

    Though i don't really care for all of the words being caital, this was a good poem that brought out emotion. Good job!

  • Lunesphera
    October 1, 2006
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    huh, I kind of like this one.


  • Rock-Junkie
    February 3, 2006
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    yeah i saw this on your xanga... by the way i like it!! anywho... yeah im not in the best mood right now. im talking to kelsey && shes semi-helping me with something && chyeah... you probably dont care cause you're probably mad at her right now. so... i finished my poem... you already know that. you were right there when i said it. *lol* but yeah... i like this so far... i think you should leave it the way it is. welp imma go now. im in the mood to write another poem. byeseez lurve ya MUAH!! see ya monday. dont get into any trouble tee-hee.
    *_*Triste*_*