Somewhere there's a forgotten clock
That still ticks within a memory
Whispers of images faded with time
Rustle like leaves in winds of mind
Images like hourglass forms
Somewhere there is calm within the storms
Figures in silhouette glide before ones eyes
Stacking experiences becoming wise
In spring we gather flowers of creative form
In Summer we bask in sunshine corn
In Autumn we consume the fruits we desire
And winter we rest in the warmth of amber fire
Author notes
Written February 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Your Best Rhymes by Fire-Fly.
400 points, ended April 18, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very lovely poem - your choice of words are a delight to read
"Whispers of images faded with time
Rustle like leaves in winds of mind"
Nice flow, a little awkward in the second stanza but does not detract from the overall loveliness of the poem.
Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest. -
This was an awesome poem, you have expressed the seasons well, thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry and good luck in this contest...
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wow, this is outstanding, I love how you chose the over all effect to be connected with seasons! Good job!
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