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En point

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Tongue
Width expands
When pressed and slid
Upwards
Catching
Trickles
Running down
Caught
On curl
Suckled
And again
Lapped
Little
Licks
Sweet delights

Summer fun.


















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Author notes

Summer always the excuse to indulge in a blitz on the ice cream and icy pole devouring.

Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • rufina caraid gold member
    February 19, 2006
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    Ice Cream - can never get enough - even in winter I'm a push-over (especially Mango hmmmm) >>> back to your poem, Delicious!!

    Von
    Edited on Feb 22, 8:49 because ''.


  • wattle silver member
    February 2, 2006
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    Yes, my kind of poetry. Love, yes; my kind of love (real love) - Thank you Seether.


  • silica silver member
    February 2, 2006
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    …And I take it, it is in the love category because you love ice cream¿?¿? Hmmmm?

    Oh well – for so few words it kinda lingers…