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Broken Heart Valentine

This broken Heart
It yearns for you
This red red Rose
It should be blue
The depth of my soul
In love with you

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Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • trekkergirl
    January 26

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    nice

    short but directly to the point.  Loved the background.  Only adds to the feel of the poem.  Loved the way it flowed.  Good write.  Thanks for sharing this.


  • LunacyxxFringe
    February 5, 2006
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    Wow, so short, yet so many feelings expressed. I love it, it's a beautiful write!