I'm in a good mood today
I know something that \he\ doesn't
Not that it should be much of a surpise
But I guess he didn't expect a hurricane
This hurricane sent smoke through it's eye
It shot projectiles a million miles an hour
Something like that would sure hurt
I guess that's why he was suprised
I knew then and I know now that I was going to die
But even as the red and blue lights flash behind me,
I can't help but smile,
Cause I'm in a real good mood now...
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Written February 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Happiness With A Twist by Sandygram.
300 points, ended February 5, 2006, 7 entries
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Yeah right, I only get up at 6:45 when I have 2 work lol. Siblings r awsome btw! I fixed my old comp so I can transfer my stories overe here...im just gonna post the one but perhaps u shall read it
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This hurricane sent smoke through it's eye ---> its
Other than that, tis a wonderful poem! I love the ending.
So how are we feeling on adoption...I'm thinking siblings?
Anywhoo, answer your IMs! Even if it is 6.45!!! -
WONDERFUL POEM
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WONDERFUL POEM
Wonderful poem. Glad you ended in a good mood.
Thank tyou for sharing. Best of luck. Take care, Sandy
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idk if it showed how I was feeling, but thanks lol
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GOOOOOOD
Oh Oh !! This is such a great piece! Wow! so incredable..meaningful in so many ways. This showed how you really feel today !
Keep up the awsome work !!
I HAVE MISSED YOU ! -
omg a poem *shocked face* august last year was the last time you posted on here, i'm glad to see you can still write, i really like this poem its seems very sarcastic but truthful at the same time. well done and keep on writing xxxxxx
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