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Stand In the Gap

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Stand In the Gap ~ acrostic
©copyright 2006 Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.


Pentopaper, who is Karen, was the first to stand for me,
Even when others declared this pen guilty of blasphemy.
Now it is my turn to stand in the gap whilst praying for her,
That each prayer shake off those demons of MS and pain in her.
Oh, mighty conquerors we are, for in us is Jesus Christ
Prepared to add His strength and armour for so little a price;
Always at our side to loose the pressure of those painful thorns.
Precious friend and sister, speak out against those fiends of dead ends,
Employing thine domain in our Saviour's name; our best of friends.
Rest, then get up and know that to thy will they must ever bend.

~~All my love and prayers unceasing,
Sister-in-Christ B♥nnieQ

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Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • Eyes Of Rain
    February 6, 2006
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    This is absolutely exquisite!
    A beautiful sentiment for such a special lady.
    Great work.
    Best of luck in the contest too.
    Peace and light,
    ~Sherry~


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 4, 2006
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    Mom this is outstanding! Beautiful... this is sure to bring a smile to Karen. Your golden pen has a healing touch of it's very own! I'm blessed to have read this wonderful heartfelt and inspirational peice today!
    Blessings and many huggles
    ~Frog


  • DarkShdwGuy
    February 3, 2006
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    This is a great piece and Karen will love it.
    I know of the time you speak in the first two lines, and I also know that she did indeed stand up for you.
    Thought we are on different paths you and I we share a commen love for a true and remarkable friend in Karen.
    Roger


  • klassy lassy
    February 3, 2006
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    Bonnie, this is so loving and I have been blessed by your strength and heart as well. Your poems evolve so beautifully in faith and desire to heal those you touch. Beautiful reflections of the divine image here!


  • pattyann4500
    February 2, 2006
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    Sis, this is so lovely and such a wonderful tribute to Karen. I know she is very special to you, and this makes her a very special person. Your love for her is well deserved and, as usual, heartfelt. Love, Patricia


  • pentopaper
    February 2, 2006
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    AWWWWWW (((((Bonnie))))) This is so very beautiful and really touched my heart. I am so blessed to have such a dear, loving, smart and talented friend such as yourself in my life, and truly thank God for such blessings! You have brought a smile to my heart! Thank you is nowhere near enough for such a powerful and touching acrostic, and for being YOU! Karen


  • Reframing-Quill
    February 2, 2006
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    Benevolently gracious and thoughtful

    Ditto, as well, to what ‘theLordReigns declared.’ Although, I haven't the pleasure to meet Karen (as yet). Even so, the Spirit knows what to pray; and when two on earth agree, then mountains are awesomely removed and victory is known of Peace.

    Most adamantly, I appreciate your gracious muse. Thank you BonnieQ.

    Love, *hugs*, and abundance of fruitfulness, cheers.
    ~*Milly *~


  • thelordreigns gold member
    February 2, 2006
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    I too will add my prayers for complete healing. Your poem is perfect dear Bonnie! - joanne


  • SexyAngel0418
    February 2, 2006
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    This is really sweet Autnie Bonnie!!! You did a great job on this one!!! Keep up the great work!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

    PS Good luck in the contest!!!


  • February 2, 2006
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    Bonnie, thank you for this lovely writing. I know Karen will really be touched by your thoughts and prayers. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.

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