You are the only woman
that I'll ever be able to love
You are perfect for me;
my tainted, little, bloody dove
Your are the light in my darkness
The only hope in my soul
And now, if I were to ever lose you,
I would be swallowed whole
You don't see what you are
and I wish you'd let me show you
that no one could ever take your place
where your light forever shines through
You ignore the best part of yourself
You don't see that you are mine
You can't hear the soft melody
when both of our hearts entwine
You are the perfect lover
I don't need to fear for your safety
You enjoy everything I do
and it's a miracle you even love me
I could never find another
that could ever match up to you
They would die when you have not
You're immune to the curse's adieu
So, don't you see, my one and only,
that I could never lose you now?
I couldn't ever live without you
I believe I might've forgotten how
Author notes
A reply to Yuna's poem, Don't Deserve You. allpoetry.com/Poem/1796704
Ai is copyrighted to Yunaleska.
It's not a GOOD reply...but a reply nonetheless. 
Written February 2nd, 2006
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well, contrived and penned... especially liked the last two lines only i'd finalized the last line with "i've already forgotten how"... just so there'd be no doubt... kudo's on this one... -
Darrin would be all *jaw drops to ground*
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I totally want to hug Belail, too....but if Rayne hugged Belail...Darrin would probably get angry....
But this is adorable and I love it!
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so adorable. I love that stanza too, though I felt if I mentioned it, I'd feel like I was copying Nocturnal up there ^^^. 
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it completely rocks.
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The last stanza is my favorite...'cause I think he HAS forgotten how to live without her. The way he sees it is...She won him over after so long of him trying to push her away...and now that she has him...he doubts that he could ever live without her now....'cause, in a way, she's his stability; his hope that he really isn't a curse.
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Aww *cries* I wanna hug him! This is so so sweet, a lovely reply, a perfect reply.
*Ai hugs Belail, feeling incredibly guilty*
It's all gorgeous and I love love love it.
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Aw...Okay, so maybe it doesn't completely suck.
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I love this poem.. it's so sweet. ;-;
The ending verse made my eyes water, which is saying something. ^^
Cheers for Belail and Ai! ^_^
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