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shed no tears

Love was untrue
Just like you and everything you said
Part of the last
Part of the past
Came and faded away
Everything I gave spit in my face
How can I forgive?
Time lade to waist
Spended in haste
As long as I live


Love was untrue, just like you
And everything you said
Part of the last
Part of the past
Came and faded away
Everything I gave spit in my face
How can I forgive?
Time lade to waste
Spended in haste
As long as I live


Love to watch you die
Shed no tears when you die
All that you took from me: suffering and misery
Shed no tears when you die

Its far beyond all the lies that you told to me
Knowing all along a stepping stone is all i would be
And in the end you don't make waste for anything you've done
Its just a game you play, bitch
You do it all for fun


I love to watch you die
Shed no tears when you die
All that you took from me: suffering and misery
Shed no tears when you cry


BLEED my pretty darling
BLEED because of me
Let me taste the tears of your sweet misery
Watch you as you slip away in to eternal sleep
Watch you as you slip away too far to be reached


Love to watch you die
Shed no tears when you die
All that you took from me: suffering and misery
Shed no tears when you die

 SHED NO TEARS
as you cry

 SHED NO TEARS
as you die,die,die,die.....

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Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • Harvester of Sorrow
    February 2, 2006
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    great

    I like it, its a solid write! I like the shed no tears thing--a great line! Reminds me of that song by the misfits, "Die, Die, Die My Darling" I love this though, its excellente! The closing stanzas before the last couplets especially...
    -RnR
    Edited on Feb 02, 5:13 p.m. because 'Change of verdict to: Die, Die, Die My Darling'.