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Echoes senyru

I can hear echoes
Reaching for my shattered soul
The beat of your heart

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Written December 24th, 2002

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  • Kristine
    October 24, 2003
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    So much said in so few words.
    You really drove home the overall experience of a good Haiku/Senyru.
    Thank you.

    Kristine


  • Ava Noire silver member
    December 31, 2002
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    ouches this aches...:( powerfully written