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Ethiopia

To help the needy let nations to unite
let baby to get the nipple to bite
the rainfall awaited from east and west
hope of humaneness flies as a kite.

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Those who increase quarrels and on the other hand humanity is in miserable condition in different parts of the world.
Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • Mohammad Ilyas
    February 4, 2006
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    I am thankful to you both for taking time and praising my writing. Thankyou again.


  • neverontime
    February 3, 2006
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    Sad, but a good read

    Wow! With this one, I am impressed! This is a very sad, but true write. Well put. Humanity tends to ignore these problems. Thank you for reminding people of the needs of others. This, I applaud you for! This is short, but gets right to the point. Very well written. Food for thought, it is. Truly good poem. Susan Oh, & good luck with the contest.

  • Mythoughtsunleashed
    February 2, 2006
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    humanity is indeed in terrible condition. society and everything is all screwed up. today i watched a video about mass genocide in Darfur. it's so sad and yet the government isn't doing anything to stop it. great poem. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
    ~Sonya