She is left lying
Panting
Throbbing inside
And in the silence once again
Her body still
Returned to a state of quiet anticipation
She waits in solitude
Startled
First a seering pain
That quickly turns to pleasure
As he lustfully thrusts himself into her
Each stroke, domineering
Controlling her every move
Once again he brings her
To that raw edge of ecstasy
His body uncontrollable
A man-beast of pure greedy passion
Driving deep into her submission
She cries out
He groans
Together they reach the crest...
An explosive force of sexual satisfction
The ultimate climactic surge
He releases her bindings
Kisses her softly
As they curl up to rest
Until the next time....
She gives in to Master's pleasures
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Written February 2nd, 2006
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Ahhhhhh, YES!!!!!!
Her orgasm was earth shattering and mind blowing, indeed - for her MASTER wisely made her wait before giving her the gift of cumming with him and then treating her tenderly as she had pleased him so!
I look forward to reading more of this series for it is very stimulating and sensual - to say the least!
Love & Peace1
Earl.
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Very nice, the submission is tangable, and the erotisism is beautifull without being vulgar, a very special write ~Dini~
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Wow this also had good imagery. Nice Job!
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Ok so my judgement is getting cloudy here. I keep hitting the damned applause button too many times. Beautiful and very erotic. Excellent.
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Fantastic
Again...wow. On to part III -
I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE, VERY SEXY AND EROTIC. NOTHING WRONG WITH A STRONG WOMAN BEING JUST A LITTLE BIT SUBMISIVE NOW AND THEN (LOL). VERY GOOD
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this was a nice follow up to the last one. I enjoyed them both thoroughly and hope to see more sometime. keep up the great work.
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yes, I agree, as lovely as the first part. wow! explosive writing.
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Again, thank you for the comments
Autumn -
again ..... wow
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Wow! This is as good as Part 1. I realised only after clicking Submit comment for Part 1 that the relationship between him and her is of a master and slave. How very well you have brought forth what happens to Goddess alone knows, how many women of our society worldwide, on an everyday basis. A very sad truth that must be tackled and ended.
Very well penned.
Best wishes,
Charishma
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Great Pice
Stormgoddess
This was excellent - Loved it alot
That was sensually erotic and just
Whoaaaaa !!! Exceptional Piece truly
going to part 1 now
I'm kinda dislexic 1st part 2 and then 1
LOL
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