She's laced to the bed by velveteen rope
Naked in the darkness
Silence consumes her
The sound of her own breathing
The thudded drumming of her heart
Echos slowly in her mind
She hears the latch click
Her body tenses...anticipation? Excitement?
She feels the burning in her loins
The desire to be totally controlled
The rush to come as she submits to his desires
She desperately tries to control the quivering
To stop the sticky moisture she feels below
Her breathing, now uneven, as she waits
Knowing he is in the room with her
Suddenly she feels it...
The hot sizzle of his tongue
Slowly creeping up her inner thigh
Coming to rest just between her womanly folds
Nestled within her pink lips
Her body arches, straining against her bindings
She eagerly thrusts her pearl to him
Wanting him to take it
To make it his pleasure,
As well as hers
Like the hungry man he is,
He devours her ripened sex
Slowly circling every spot,
Every lap of his tongue making her jump
Causing her to tremor as wave after wave
Of euphoric passion courses through her
As he brings her to the brink of orgasmic escape
She tightens
Thrashing uncontollably...
And he leaves the room.....
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Written February 2nd, 2006
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YOUR MASTER SOUNDS LIKE AN ACOOMPISHED MASTER, INDEED!
A pet needs to be brought to the brink of his or her orgasm many times to know the true pleasure of cuming only at their Masters or their Mistresses command! I took my cock in hand and stroked to this as my Mistress has ordered me to do - BUT I didn't cum as she has forbidden my to - until she gives her blessing.
And now i must leave the room - for I hear her calling to me - as she has to pee pee and it is my job to keep her pussy clean!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Mmmm, ok, thanks for the stroll down memory lane. Dang, I haven't read this one in a while. Thanks for the comments.
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Woooo this is Crazyy Cant wait to read your whole series lmao..
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Thanks for the comments. I appreciate them so verymuch.
Storm -
This is truly special – I think I may be doing a bit of reading in the next few days! I love the passion that comes through in this write, the submission is strong, but the love is stronger, and that to me it the mark of a true BDSM relationship! The softness of the velvet, the strength of His tongue… the contrasts are amazing!
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Wow GREAT. Moving on to the next one.
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Hot
That was a really nice poem. Great Imagery and it had a good flow to it. Keep writing poetry and check out some of mine! -
Yeesh, this is good. Excellent visuals. That sounds like something I would do. Get her started and leave. On to the next.
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whew, that was exciting, but he leaves the room.....that sucks!! Excellent poem..love it!
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that had to suck. The ending i mean.
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Thank you for the comments, and the huge compliment. It is very appreciated.
I do read quite a bit of erotica, mostly things that are posted on this site and the others I post at. But my sources? You mean like where I get my ideas? In my own mind, lol.
I am an extremely erotic person, with a very vivid mind, and I guess one could even venture to say imagination. Some are from experience, some are things I wouldn't mind experiencing, and some are just pure fantasy.
I am also in he porcess of writing a short story, in parts. It was sort of at the request of someone, so until it is finished and he has read it all, I won't post it anywhere. Maybe one day.
Autumn -
Hot!
Somewhere there is an erotic contest going which you could easily win. It started running yesterday I think. I mean easily. Your the best writer of erotic poetry I've read on here. Do you read a lot of erotic poetry? I'd like to know your sources if you do. -
this was a fun read and very hot. keep up the great work.
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ahhhh. This is soo hot. The end is so toturous! Amazing writing. I'm gonna read part 2 now!
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Thank you all for the comments. They are very appreciated, as I wasn't really sure if I wanted to post this.
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wow!!
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"And he leaves the room"...that was a BIG SHOCK! I imagined it would go on and on. Thank you for having Part 2 ;-)
This makes me want to hear the voice of a special someone rightaway. Very steamy, sensual and articulate. This is vivid and pours forth very well with each line as it unfolds. The ending has me questioning as to this: Is she his prisoner or a sort of slave, or, what is really the relation between him and her. It could be anything, but, I felt somewhere in this, I think it was in the beginning few and ending few lines, that she has succumbed to his pleasure; that she in a way is forced to submit her feminity to him, though she wants 'love', he is devouring her 'lustfully'. That was the feeling I got.
You write so very well. I better head for the second shower of the day
All the best,
Charishma
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very nice! i simply enjoyed the read. it even turned me on a bit. loved it -
WHOAAAA!!!
Exceptional without any doubts -
Sexy, in a sadistic sort of way.
Phew! I definitely need a polar-bear dip now. That was hot! It was extremely sensual, and I loved the end, as I can almost imagine what the main character's torment must be like in the heat of the moment. There also seems to be a certain sadistic element to it that, I have to say, made it all the more enjoyable Great write, incredibly steamy and delicious, right through to the ending. A job well done, and thanks for sharing.
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