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the white light

im am just a number.
standing in line
when my number is up
ill be just fine

i wont feel this pain
il see the 'white light'
everything-once dark
now, will be bright

all of my life,
ive looked forword to this day.
knowing it will all be over soon
i can only pray

i can only hope
and i can only dream
that what i made of life
is more then what it seems

but what is to happen,
on judgment day?
ive never read the bible
and i dont know what to say,
i dont know what to feel
and i dont know what to think
but my fears are so real
as i take my last drink
all these years of pain
boil down to one point
i give up this fight
i step through that gate
and see that white light

Author notes

im not depressed, i was just bored
Written February 2nd, 2006

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  • what if love7
    February 14, 2006
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    thank you! i have so many more poems i want to put on here i just think i write too much on love and whatnot. thank you for commenting and reading it really means alot

  • nickoli005
    February 11, 2006
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    great

    Nice i like this alot. I'm gald your opening up creativly, i'm having a hard time doing this once in a while i'll stray off topic of love and lost love but not that often but from the works that i've seen from you, you do a great job of switching up the main topic of your art.