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Hurricane

I am torn
by the Hurricane
of your sexuality

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Written February 1st, 2006

A contest entry

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  • leander Moderators member
    February 7, 2006
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    oopsie aaah! you've posted this one two times, but the only difference with the first well is a little spelling error in title... you can delete that one with clicking the edit button on top of the page, then delete


  • fire angel
    February 6, 2006
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    great words really gets ur brain thinking awesome!


  • Pink Absinthe
    February 2, 2006
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    this is brill! i have never seen sexuality being described as a hurricance and i give it a new, passionate facete. you definetly deserve a prize in the competition, those three lines saw so much. well done, keep it coming!
    ~Absinthe


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    February 2, 2006
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    Holy shit. That's awesome.