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Hurricanr

I am torn
by the Hurricane
of your sexuality

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Written February 1st, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    February 7, 2006
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    hmm... I don't really see an image of nature within this one (since you used hurricane as a metaphor here... though I enjoyed reading it thank you for entering