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The Need

Let the light find you.
I need to see you clearly.
The power of it may blind you,
but I need the sight so dearly.

Let my weakness reach you.
Feel me as you've never felt before.
I have so much of which to beseech you,
and I need your strength all the more.

Let my love call to you.
I need you to know that I am there.
Like rain from the heavens, let it fall on you.
The need for you is more than I can bear.

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  • KittieLyyn
    June 18, 2007
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    this is breathtaking. great job.


  • Shawna Haag
    February 1, 2006
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    Oh this is simply beautiful. Your show such emotion in your words, Great job and thankyou for allowing me to read and comment on this.