Its too late to say good bye
Too late to say I care
Its too late to say I love you
Tears falling from my eyes
A white rose I place on your earthen bed
5 long years past
and I finally shed tears
I finally come see you
I finally admit that you are gone
In a way...I am so mad at you
for leaving so suddenly
and never saying good bye
I wish I could see you just one last time
and tell you how much I love you
and how you made my life so much fun
but its too late....you are gone...
but as late as it is...I still want you to know...
you will always be in my heart...
and that I will always love you so....
....I miss you....
Author notes
to my uncle...someone very special to me who's suicide changed my life in more ways than I let off...I will always miss him...and I love him with all my heart.....
Written February 1st, 2006
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Bravo!
A very deftly done piece of poetry, poignant, touching. Quite excellent! Bravo! -
wow this was brillian!! very intersting and very emotional. excellent job, keep up the great work.
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my inspriation...was to my uncle...I fanally went to see his grave.....and I felt I should write this.....thanks for reading and commenting ^^
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wow, where did u get ur insperation for this poem. i really like it. i hope everything worked out -
I'm sorry about your uncle. This is a very sad poem and it is something that I really can't relate too. That must be an awful, tragedy to have to come to grips with. Your poem was well written. I thought it flowed well and dividing your verses a little bit, the way you did, really helped the flow. More importantly though, your poem flowed in ideas with each verse continuing your theme. This poem has a sense of completeness in its intent. Not a line in this poem seemed out of place to me and nothing left we wondering. However, I'm sure you just skimmed the top of your emotions on this poem because I know your mind must be running a lot more when trying to write a poem like that. It must be hard to choose what to include and what to leave out. I think this was an awsome poem and an awsome presentation of your feelings about your loss. Good work, God bless, and once again, I'm sorry about your uncle. john
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emotional for me to read...I am sorry for your lose...I know these feelings all to well...I lost my little brother, before I could tell him I loved him. Sometimes you think you have more time. thank you for these words...great piece
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